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Joseph Teti's avatar

this still rocks 🪨!

Nik Hoffmann's avatar

Thanks, man! I'm still quite fond of those last couple stanzas.

Oz the Pilgrim's avatar

Wonderful poem, I love the lines, "Something rising in the falling//Boiling, roiling on the brink." Reading it alound gave me goosebumps with how smooth it is. Keep up the great work.

Nik Hoffmann's avatar

Thank you! I will admit, those lines are among my personal favorites.

Ollie Burgess's avatar

This is so powerful. Very well done.